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Monday, April 30, 2007

Dressed in red

Drops of rain and dust were falling, as the air was screaming through the leaves.
While you were waiting in the river
dressed in red,
holding hands with tears...

Wind was covering your face, as you were hugging the hope of the place to call home,
like a butterfly who flies against the row.
And desperation has no more...

As the first drops were falling onto your face, a fierce fire,
without discrimination, the dress turned to black,
to fit the sky...

And the river changed its row, the leaves stopped to wisper.
Before your tender face turned to white... so pure.
As you were no more hoping for love...

6 comments:

Dannossiel said...

"and desperation has no more...".apla gamato.genika m aresei pou dimiourgei upovlitikes eikones kai atmosfaira.after all that s what s gothic is about...

vampiria said...

"As you were no more hoping for love..."
"...but waited the end to come slow, quietly, through the sad veils of the evening clouds...
And you became a part of sorrow in your long black dress...
A star that never reached heaven..."

Είναι πολύ όμορφο Zelot μου...απλά...

Zelot said...

Hello παιδιά! Δεν ξέρω αν θα γελάσετε ή θα κλάψετε αλλά αυτό που περιγράφω στο post ήταν ένα όνειρο που είδα τις προάλλες...
Σας ευχαριστώ για τα καλά σας σχόλια!
Vam, cu soon!

vampiria said...

Μπορούμε να κλάψουμε από τα γέλια! Χαχα! Τότε η απόδοσή του ήταν super! Φιλιά Zelot! CU soon

drunksoul said...

Πολύ ωραία όνειρα βλέπεις ρε συ.Εγώ δεν τα θυμάμαι σχεδόν ποτέ.

Zelot said...

Άσε vam, νομίζω πως οι σκέψεις μου ώρες-ώρες με καταπίνουν...

drunk, αν και στην προκείμενη περίπτωση μάλλον για θρίλερ πρόκειται, ήταν ωραίο σαν εικόνα...

CU all!